Room 6 is learning how to write about setting. We are using descriptive words to make our writing sound more interesting. We are also making sure to describe accurately so that when the audience is reading our writing, they get a picture in their head that is similar to the one in the writers.
We hope you enjoy!
By Zoe
By Julia
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Hello my name is Danica from Room Five at Karoro School. I love your post. I hope you enjoy making the post for your blog.
ReplyDeleteWow!!! Amazing work room 6 I like the way you described what you can see at the beach. How long did it take?
ReplyDeletegreat work! i love this room 6 cant wait to see more on here. I love this post because at the bottom it says,Please leave a positive comment if you can! but maybe explain more about hat happened down the bottom like what you did! hey quick question, whats your best part about this post.
ReplyDeleteKIA Ora room six my name is Kobe i'm from Paparore school i'm a year 6 I love this post because it has a lot of description it remains me of when i went to the beach and got hit by a big big wave what do you like doing at the beach?😀
ReplyDeleteAwesome! The beach is a great place to relax! (besides from incoming tides :1). Your guys descriptions on the beach are very accurate to the real thing. One small thing on Julia's, what smell was delicious?
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